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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Aug 19, 2004 16:34:02 GMT -5
My upcoming stories include:
* "The Hunt for Douchey" - my origin story!
* "FrankenShrimp" - Shrimpy's origin story!
* "Coronation Shrimp" - The reworked version of "CoronAlex street"! More interesting and disturbing in a sexual manner...
* "Not really American Shrimp" - American pie parody.
* "Mr. Shrimpy versus bullying" - Shrimpy kills a young man who is bullying Alex and friends.
More as they come! Hmmm... How about more TV parody stories? If the Coronation Shrimp works well, look out for "The Shrimpsons" when we move to Springfield!
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Post by Gimpy,LordofallthatBreathes! on Aug 19, 2004 17:13:07 GMT -5
Sounds most delightful! I bet "The Shrimpsons" would be quite entertaining/hilarious/awesome!
I might as well post some of my upcoming stories aswell:
- "The Origin of Gimpy, Lord of all that Breathes" my origin story, half done.
- "Steve Lawson and the Temple of Moon!" Sequel to my Indy style Steve Lawson story.
- "The Rusting" A short story that I have yet to start about a rust plague...
- "Roadtrip Story" This story doesn't have a title yet and hasn't been started, but will be my next big tale.
That's it so far. I might write the future story, but i'm not sure yet.
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Aug 19, 2004 17:37:58 GMT -5
We could do a joint project for the future story(!)
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Post by Zoidberg on Aug 19, 2004 17:51:03 GMT -5
yes and i could help... somehow
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Aug 20, 2004 4:01:34 GMT -5
Indeed.
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Aug 25, 2004 17:55:26 GMT -5
Good news - "The hunt for Douchey" - chapter 1 is almost complete. I have changed it drastically from the actual story; this version is a lot more exciting and Oggelsby, Neil and Corey are present at the discovery (Satinder is in our adventure, too, but joins later and Lynnesey follows throughout). This story features more subplots so when I really get it started, it should be good!
"Coronation Shrimp" will also rule. I'm changing the original storyline slightly; Mr. Shrimpy is told he has inherited a house on Coronation street, the set of Alex's favourite show. He, Alex, Calum, Satinder, Neil, Oggelsby and Lynnesey move into the street and cause chaos with the locals, unbeknownst that it is actually a cruel experiment! Shrimpy takes over the local factory (and fires the original owners) and changes the genre of merchandise (the factory currently manufactures underwear, Shrimpy will have his sewing girls making nuclear weapons!), Alex and Satinder flirt with almost every young girl on the street (and for some unexplicable reason, they all fall in love with them... maybe it's because they are under mind control?!?), Neil and Lynnesey fall in love with Hayley Cropper and are concerned that they might be turning straight (until they learn that Hayley used to be a man) and Oggelsby gets into trouble with local butcher, Fred Elliot. In fact, the only character who is concerned about the move is Calum... but then again, he isn't getting much action!
"FrankenShrimp" is the tale of Shrimpy's origin; revived via a device built by Fingers and Jacko, the lobster causes chaos for Alex and friends!
"Not-really American Shrimp" is the tale of Alex, Calum, Satinder, Neil and Oggelsby setting out on the greatest quest of all time! Let's just say, they'll lose more than their dignity!
"Mr. Shrimpy VS. Bullying" is inspired by a dream I had. Alex and friends are attacked by the school bullies, so Shrimpy steps in to save his slaves!
New stories: -
"Mr. T VS. Mr. Shrimpy" - The world's toughest human versus the world's toughest crustaceon. Who will come out on top? When Shrimpy destroys youth centres across the world and places a hypnotising drug in the world's milk supply, only Mr. T can stand in his way!
"Silence of the crabs" - When a crustaceon murderer wreaks havoc on town, the top cops, Alex and Calum, have to visit a jailed criminal who has commited similar crimes. They find him to be Hannibal Shrimpy, a sophisticated human eater.
Proposed stories: - These stories are just ideas at the minute...
"The Shrimpsons" - after their move to Coronation street, the gang move to Springfield where Shrimpy befriends Mr. Burns (and Neil - Smithers...), Fingers and Jack work in the lab with professor Frink, Lynnesey goes against Comic Book Guy in a complaint fest, Oggelsby joins the police force with Wiggum and Alex, Calum and Satinder meet the Simpsons!
"(South Park parody)" - another TV move, with Alex and the gang meeting the South Park kids.
"Star Claws" - the much awaited 6 part film series with Shrimpy as Darth Vader, Alex as Luke Skywalker, Calum as Han Solo, Satinder as Lando Calrissian, Oggelsby as Jabba the Hutt, Neil as Salacious Crumb, Lynnesey as Boba Fett, Fingers as Yoda and Jacko as Chewbacca. Other characters, such as Qui Gon Ginn (spelling?) and Obi-Wan will be filled by other BOS members (I have Gimpy in mind for Obi-Wan, T-L for Qui Gon...). Douchey will be Darth Maul (The Goblin Menace), no idea as of yet on who will play C3PO or R2D2...
Phoenix Sights: (this was proposed on the old board) When I.C. Nuffing has a near death experience, his life flashes before his eyes... well, it would have if he could see... Anyway, the old guy realises that he's hardly achieved anything in his life so with the help of Alex, Calum and slaves he decides to live his life long dream of owning a social club! With dodgy deals, bad acts and a fire halfway through that almost wrecks everything, there are guaranteed laughs galore!
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Aug 31, 2004 13:37:00 GMT -5
Hey, hey, hey! I'm back from Wales with news on pretty much all of my stories!
The first chapter of "The hunt for Douchey" is completed, expect it's arrival sometime later this week!
"FrankenShrimp", "Not really American Shrimp", "Mr. Shrimpy VS. bullying", "Mr. T VS. Mr. Shrimpy", "Silence of the crabs" and "Phoenix sights" are all on hold so don't expect any of them soon, but I am nearing the end of the planning stages for my other stories! Let me fill you in...
"Coronation Shrimp" is set to join up with 5 other upcoming stories to create "The great time-travelling TV trauma" in which Alex, Shrimpy and friends (who are all considerably older, about 10 years) travel across the world and through time after un-knowingly being signed up as stars in a reality TV show set on government imprisonment centre, Coronation street (This all occurs in "Coronation Shrimp")! Fingers and Jack have been kidnapped and once Alex and pals catch on to the TV bosses' game, they free their animal pals and set off to Springfield! Fingers and Jack's legendary time machine (which they engineered during the '90's) is stolen so our heroes consult the help of Professor Frink to build a new one, but the TV bosses have another trick up their sleeves when they release Sideshow Bob from prison on a mission to kill the gang ("The Shrimpsons")! The guys move to South Park in the witness protection program where Oggelsby is reunited with the woman he lost his virginity to 9 years ago, as well as her 8 year old, obese son, Eric Cartman! Could Oggelsby be Cartman's father?!? (well, of course not, but he doesn't know that!) This all happens in "Cartman's dad is a chubby swot" (south park parody). Fingers and Jack complete their new time machine (with the help of Professor Frink, Mephisto and Doc. Brown) and the gang plan to travel to the 1960's to prevent Coronation street from becoming a government experiment, but the machine doesn't keep dates very well... and the gang end up in 3001 ("Back to the Futurama") where they join Planet express and Neil, Oggelsby and Lynnesey go undercover as DOOP agents to gain access to a rare supply of plutonium which powers the machine! After the machine is fixed, it's back to the '60's! Unfortunately, that means 60,000BC and the gang get attacked by dinosaurs! Running low on fuel, the machine travels forwards, but crashes in 2000BC where the gang meet the Flintstones and have to find fuel to get home! ("The land before Shrimp")
In the final installment of the saga, the gang get to the 1960's, but not all goes according to plan and Alex and Calum travel to the 1990's where they go undercover as priests with I.C. Nuffing on the Irish settlement of Craggy Island ("Holy Crap") to hide from the government! Fingers and Jack meet their younger selves and develop another time machine, but will they be able to save the world, let alone their friends?!?
Sounds cool, huh? I've also made developments with Star Claws and have planned the characters from the original trilogy (even some of the minor characters like that robot who followed R2-D2 and C3P0 at the very start and then dissapeared without an explanation. That pissed me off!) The characters are:
Luke Skywalker: Me Han Solo: Calum Darth Vader: Shrimpy C3P0: Neil R2D2: Oggelsby Obi Wan: Gimpy! Leia: My sister, Emma (the other Skywalker!) Chewbacca: Jacko Yoda: Fingers Jabba the Hutt: Georgina, the fatty Lando Calrissian: Satinder Boba Fett: Lynnesey That damn robot from the start: Neil's Phillipino whore, Enrique (he's not real and he gets blown up on Tatooine)
I have planned more characters. More info. soon!
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Post by Gimpy,LordofallthatBreathes! on Sept 2, 2004 1:29:33 GMT -5
Ah, this sounds so great Alex! I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!! ::bounces up and down and breaks chair:: I'm afraid I'm quite behind on my works. I have just started the Origin of Gimpy Lord of all that Breathes and am stuck on it. You see, I don't want to make it too long and am writing it like.....a history book....which isn't very entertaining (unless you like history ) and if I write it in normal tone then it might take too long...It's getting me all worked up! I've also started Steve Lawson and the Temple of Moon! That is coming along quite well. It features more of my old teachers and even a few of my old peers. Basicaly, its a Temple of Doom spoof except Lawson and his 'team' discover a Moon worshipping cult lead by Gimpy! Should be quite good... Haven't started that nameless roadtrip story either yet....or "The Rusting". "The Rusting" is a short story inspired by an incident I once had at school. My PE shirt would get wet while we were doing the swim unit and my locker was all rusty so the rust fused into the shirt making a ....... rusty shirt (duh). In the story, this rusty shirt starts a rust disease and rust overtakes the town! Is there a way to save oneself from this twisted plague? Maybe! Yeah, basicaly, I've had writers block... I need a better computer in my room so I can lock myself in there and type alnight.... Your chum sounds awesome Alex! I can't wait to read it ALL!!!!
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Sept 2, 2004 1:48:56 GMT -5
Thank you, melord, but I am still yet to start all of my stories with the exception of "The hunt for Douchey" and a few pages of "Coronation Shrimp" I wrote in a free lesson last year...
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Post by King Edward Potatostein on Sept 2, 2004 10:48:30 GMT -5
Hey, Alex, can I play the guy who interigates Princess Laya (can't remember his name, and I was once a big fanatic!)
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Sept 2, 2004 11:01:10 GMT -5
Grand Moff Tarkin?
I was gonna put you and Tim in one of the earlier stories. Most likely, "Episode 2: Attack of the clowns"...
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Post by King Edward Potatostein on Sept 2, 2004 11:16:54 GMT -5
Cool. Is DisneyDave in it?
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Post by Zoidberg on Sept 2, 2004 12:20:10 GMT -5
YAY! cant wate Alex
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Sept 2, 2004 12:40:20 GMT -5
Disney Dave is Emperor Palpatrine or at least the main bad guy in every story.
I haven't watched The Phantom Menace or Attack of the Clones in quite some time, but Qui Gon Jinn will be True-lies and Obi Wan will be Gimpy. Darth Maul will be Douchey.
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Post by Zoidberg on Sept 2, 2004 12:46:17 GMT -5
very good i think i might write a story or two
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