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Post by Zoidberg on Feb 2, 2005 19:24:00 GMT -5
I have an idea for a new RP so here is gose
Dial M For Murder!
This is weekly RP in witch every Monday the chief of police in Brotherhood of Steel will call Detective Zoidberg to solve a Murder mystery, Detective Zoidberg will go out on the town and talk to the citizens of the town ((the BoS members)) on Friday Detective Zoidberg will call everyone to his mansion to study them (sometimes he might call them earlier the Friday) this study will continue till Saturday when he calls them all into the Accusing Pallor. Each BoS member will have a chance to start the RP
Notes: This will not happen in real-time
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Post by Vensent on Feb 2, 2005 20:05:29 GMT -5
Fenrir: Ok then, let's start this!
*Oggelsgy enters*
Oggelsby: Guess what? I'm getting married!
*Fenrir shoots Oggelsby*
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Post by Zoidberg on Feb 2, 2005 21:51:37 GMT -5
((ok now to start the investgation...... Not me some one else, Fenrir maybe?))
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Feb 3, 2005 3:35:54 GMT -5
I wanna start it (I have a good idea or 2). I have to go to school first, but I'll think about it over the day...
One idea that I'd like to contribute now though is that the person who starts off the mystery IMs everyone involved except Zoid with details of their character and who the murderer is so we can all play along!
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Post by Zoidberg on Feb 3, 2005 8:07:02 GMT -5
((Ok sounds good Alex, and i love that idea))
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Feb 3, 2005 11:47:54 GMT -5
Okay, here goes. I'll write the first bit in story form, but it's up to everybody else how they choose to do their sections. BTW, you'll only find out who the murderer is if you are involved. Each new character in the story (no matter how minor) should come with a datasheet (like a card in Clue(do)) which Zoid can look over and make predictions/accusations from. Here is one as an example:
Case number: 001 Suspect Name: Zoidberg Occupation: Ammateur detective Usual whereabouts: Alaska Possible motives: Hungry and needed work to fund search for food.
Zoid can then track them down at their wherabouts and question them. He also has something to go by when he initially tracks them down. It is possible to fill in the card with "(None)" or "(Unknown)" for practically every category, especially for generic characters who have little to do with the story. An example of this will follow in this entry.
I will be posting again in a moment with part one so to distinguish easily between the two.
Good luck, Zoidberg! And Godspeed...
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Feb 3, 2005 12:07:04 GMT -5
A strong breeze rattled the trees around the roundabout and all was silent as the figures gathered there observed the body, oozing life before them. One of the figures, the local cheif of police, Dr. Alexander C. Hale III, shook his head and looked down. "What the hell did you do that for, Fenrir?!?" he slapped his forehead, "Oggelsby was just telling us the news which he called us here for..." "You can never be too careful, Cheif..." Fenrir smirked, lowering his smoking pistol, "I was using my initiative..." "How were you doing that?!?" Alex demanded, "You just killed a civillian for no reason!!!" "I'm not dead..." Oggelsby groaned, "I'm just severely wounded!!!" Fenrir and Alex ignored him and continued their conversation; he was dead to them. "Look, if Oggelsby gets married, he's bound to kill the bride..." Fenrir explained, "I doubt she'd survive him on top of her on the wedding night..." "Damnit, Fenrir!!!" Alex half-laughed, "You may be the best psychic detective we have on the force, but you gotta calm it with the killing people!"
"But I'm not dead!!!"
"Sorry, boss..." Fenrir shrugged, "Now let's get out of here!!!" The two turned to leave the site, but stopped, horrified, when they saw a body hanging from a tree. "SHIT!!!" Fenrir exclaimed, "I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!!" "It's a MURDER mystery story, Fen..." Alex rolled his eyes, "Somebody's bound to die..." "Sorry..." Fenrir calmed himself down, "Shall we take it back to the lab for forensic testing?" "Nah..." Alex yawned, "Let's go get McDonalds instead..." The two turned and left the park, unaware that they were being watched. "Curse you!!!" hissed a voice in the bushes, "You'll be next, Brotherhood of Steel... You'll be next..."
So that's the end of part 1. Here are the factfile thingees...
Case number: 002 Suspect Name: Dr. Alexander C. Hale III Occupation: Loveable police cheif Usual whereabouts: Home, work, McDonalds, Prison and KFC Possible motives: Gets paid for investigating murders. Dislikes people and wanted to expose Fenrir as a fake.
Case number: 003 Suspect Name: Fenrir Occupation: Psychic police detective Usual whereabouts: Forest of Fenrir, random streets and stores, anywhere that has nature Possible motives: Easy to prove he's psychic if he knows the killer's next move. Gets paid by the hour.
Case number: 004 Suspect Name: Adam Lee Oggelsby Occupation: Owner and Operator of Oggelsby family diner Usual whereabouts: Oggelsby family diner, school, the cemetary, casualty, etc. Possible motives: Fed up of being ignored.
Case number: ??? Suspect Name: Unknown Occupation: Murderer Usual whereabouts: Hiding in the bushes Possible motives: Dislikes the BOS #nosmileys
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Post by Vensent on Feb 3, 2005 17:20:16 GMT -5
I fixed my usual whereabouts thing, unless you want me to change it back.
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Post by GlacetheIceLord on Feb 3, 2005 17:55:03 GMT -5
so now do I write on and then put down my ID thingee?
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Post by Zoidberg on Feb 3, 2005 17:59:41 GMT -5
((yes))
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Post by GlacetheIceLord on Feb 3, 2005 19:06:14 GMT -5
Meanwhile at Frozen Island Glace was helping himself to some freezing pizza. The guys were hanging out in the creature room riding their desired creature. Suddendly the phone rang. "I got it" called Glace but he knew the guys couldnt hear him he was on the top floor not the bottom. "Do you want to join us at Mcdonalds"? he heard Officer Alex ask him. "Sure" said Glace. Glace ran down the stairs to the creature room. "Im going to Mcdonalds with Alex" he said. "Can we come"? they all asked at once. "Is there a phone down here"? he asked. "No" they all said. So Glace borrowed a spare pegasus and road away on it to the main lobby were he asked Alex if they could all come and Alex said yes and they all hopped onto a desired creature and were about to leave when they realised that they forgot about Liam the baby ice elf. So Glace went to Liam got the adorable little tike and they finnaly left. when they arrived at Mcdonalds they saw a body hanging on a tree near the fast-food restraunt. They entered Mcdonalds after tying there creatures up on lamp posts whic froze instantly from the animals. They saw Alex and Fenrir sitting at a table discussing last nights episode of play boy. "Hey guys have you seen that body on the tree"? Glace asked. "Ya" they said. "Well what are you going to do about it"? Glace asked. They both shrugged their shoulders. "Oh well" Glace said. They all had a number three with a Dr.Pepper and they all rubbed their stomachs afterward saying that it was delicious. They all walked outside to see one of their creatures lying on the ground with light silver blood running down it neck.
Case Number:005 Suspect name:Glace the Ice Lord Occupation:Wild Mystical Ice Beast Tamer Usual where abouts: Frozen Island, with Fenrir, Alex and the rest of the BOS members, on distant Ice Island's taming wild mystical ice beasts Possible motives:Hates people showing off good talents
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Post by Zoidberg on Feb 3, 2005 19:31:55 GMT -5
Meanwhile Detective Zoidberg was sitting in his room listening to music (Rock of course) when he got the call for Fenrir. “Hello” Zoidberg said in his low bass voice, “What a Murder?! I’m on the case!” He hung up his phone and went into his closet and got out his detective’s hat (aka A Sherlock Homes hat) and put on his detective’s overcoat and monocle, he also threw badges he stole from various law enforcement agencies into his pocket. “Well I am off” he said leaving his mansion and getting in his car (A GTO) and off he went to McDonalds
Case number: 001 Suspect Name: Zoidberg Occupation: Ammateur Detective, with a degree in Muderonmy and Muderolgy Usual whereabouts: Alaska, His mansion on top of the forbidding hill outside the town Possible motives: None, not even a suspect
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Post by Vensent on Feb 3, 2005 22:55:17 GMT -5
Glace, you need to fix your motives. They aren't things you like to do, they're your reasons for possibly being the murderer.
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Post by Gimpy,LordofallthatBreathes! on Feb 4, 2005 1:00:40 GMT -5
Meanwhile, 32 minutes before Oggelsby's unfortunate death...
Oggelsby: Extra toppings today Gimpichi! I'm getting married!
Gimpy (Gimpichi): Eh! Whata I tella you! There a wench outta there for every man! *shouts behind him* Pavrichi! Extra salt on a da pizza! Thisa man isa gettin' married!
Pavrichi: I pity the girl...
Oggelsby: *with pizza* Okey dokey! Bye Gimpichi! Next time you see me, I'll be hanging onto a girl's neck and ordering my wedding pizza!
Gimpichi: Eh! What a day is da weddin'!?
Oggelsby: Three days from today!
Gimpichi: Oh what a shame! We just made that day our...pay double for a pizza day...but you get a free soda cup!
Oggelsby: Hey! Opa!
Gimpichi: Get out you Greek bastard! ROME RULES THE GREEKS!!!!!
*Oggelsby runs out in fear*
Case number: 006 Suspect name: Gimpy I. Hoagey (AKA Gimpichi Rarichi) Occupation: Overlord of "CHEEZA SPEEZA PIZZA and hardware" Usual Whereabouts: The pizza parlor, the post office, Bengl's Cryptid Shop, USRobotics factory outside of town, the fountain in the park. Possible Motives: Extreme patriotism for Italians which leads him to despise Greeks. Lusts to make 'the streets run red with pizza sauce'. Likes to make a profit.
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Post by Googy McFloogal Puss on Feb 4, 2005 2:22:52 GMT -5
Glace; Episode of Play boy? It's a magazine/channel, not a show (at least, I don't think it is...) Number 3 with a Dr. Pepper? It's McDonalds, not a Chinese take away (at least, I don't think it is...)! But I liked: Loves to take care of the baby ice elf and loves to ride his mystical ice beast's around :D
Anyway, my next bit...
Gathered around the dead creature, the party all exchanged glances. "Well, no point leaving the thing to rot..." Alex pulled on a bib, "I'm still hungry after eating that giant cardboard number 3... It was delicious, but I would have rather had chicken nuggets and fries..." "You can't eat it!!!" protested Glace, "We must give him a true heroes burial!!!" "Shut up, Glace!" Fenrir jabbed him in the ribs. Glace walked away, slightly upset by the remark and caressed Baby Liam. Meanwhile, Alex and Fenrir were tucking in to the beast when they stopped to think. "Hey, do you think this thing was murdered?" Fenrir suggested. "No..." Alex gnawed on a random limb. "It was! It was!!!" came the screams of Oggelsby, "And I saw who did it!!!" "Are you still here?!?" Alex rolled his eyes. "Yes, because you bastards left me to die... My fiancee will be getting cold..." Oggelsby complained. "Your fiancee?" Fenrir asked, "You never told us who she was..." "Her name is Rachel... You remember her from school, right Alex?" Oggelsby replied. Alex had a flashback to his days at Dartmouth High school before the accident which had left him confined to this wheelchair for life. He remembered Rachel as a loud, overly-posh girl with massive hands and he shuddered. Still, everybody always said Oggelsby and Rachel would end up together. "Yes," Alex nodded, "And I'd say that Fenrir here just did you a favour..." Oggelsby went to protest, but was interrupted by Glace who ran back towards his friends in tears. "What is it now..." Fenrir yawned, uninterested. "It's B-b-baby Liam!!!" Glace cried, "He's... He's..." Glace could not finish the sentence; he was too upset. Alex and Fenrir glanced towards where Glace had been stood to see several puddles of blood leading off into the woods and at least one of Baby Liam's major organs lying on the path. "Damn elf!!!" Alex cursed, "Why couldn't you have got a gnome? At least they fetch gold for you!!!" "I want Liam!!!" Glace whined. "Too late; he'll be dead by now." Fenrir shrugged. "But guys, he can't die! We gotta save him!!!" Glace pleaded. "No." Alex and Fenrir spontaneously replied. "Fine then!!!" Glace spat, "If you won't save Liam, then I will!!!" Glace boarded a flying unicorn and rode it in the direction of the woods. Unfortunately, the unicorn had seen better days and collapsed under Glace's weight. "Um..." Glace thought, embarrassed, "I'll walk..." "I find that offensive!!!" Alex clutch the sides of his wheelchair. Glace knew in his heart that he would not find the baby elf. And Fenrir and Alex just knew it (not in their hearts; they'd seen the bear carrying him off, but pretended not to notice). "What a laugh!" Alex tried not to smile. "I know..." Fenrir shook his head, laughing, "He loves that thing..." "What do ya say we go back to McDonalds and have some real food?" Alex suggested, "You coming, Oggelsby?" But Oggelsby was gone...
Case number: 007 Suspect Name: Baby Liam Occupation: Baby Elf Usual whereabouts: Glace's ice palace Possible motives: Wants to be changed.
Case number: 008 Suspect Name: Rachel Ladd Occupation: Cattle farmer Usual whereabouts: Her farm, Oggelsby family diner Possible motives: Fed up of being criticised about her choice in men.
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