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Post by SquirrelBoy on Oct 29, 2008 19:47:02 GMT -5
Well?
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Oct 30, 2008 19:01:51 GMT -5
*looks at lack of posts* That bad huh?
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Post by Bengl Von Shadowstein on Oct 31, 2008 1:43:44 GMT -5
I thought it was good.
Danocka is a fairly cleche alien name, though.
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Oct 31, 2008 9:03:05 GMT -5
Figured i'd rewrite it. I was in a bit of a hurry and just wanted to get it down so I could improve on it.
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Nov 5, 2008 8:30:24 GMT -5
You know what, the hell with it. It sounds too much like Halo and I no longer have any interest in it.  |
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