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Post by MightySage on Sept 7, 2008 14:56:52 GMT -5
Told you it would be done by the weekend. anyway, in case you havn't guessed, so far WarmRootBeer, Phantom General, False-Truths, and Gimpy have appeared, as well as the Great Commander who's identity will be revealed later on. So, was it at least bearable to read? what do I need to improve on?
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Post by Bengl Von Shadowstein on Sept 7, 2008 19:23:52 GMT -5
Awesome! But your punctuation needs work...
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Post by MightySage on Sept 8, 2008 6:15:03 GMT -5
I'd imagine so, seeing as I had only a couple of minutes to type it all up(had it written down in notebook). Anyway, I should have Chapter 1 up sometime this week(most likely wendsday or friday) so be on the look out. Edit: Just went over the story and fixed most of the mistakes. ;D
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Sept 11, 2008 20:07:39 GMT -5
Chuck Norris style epic-ness. *rocks back and forth in his chair as he impatiently awaits the next chapter*
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Post by MightySage on Sept 12, 2008 6:18:12 GMT -5
might have to wait till tomorrow, dumbass friends distracting me all week long with Smash Bros. and Resident Evil 4.
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Sept 12, 2008 11:05:50 GMT -5
THE PRESSURE IS TOO MUCH!!! *head implodes*
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Post by MightySage on Sept 12, 2008 11:11:54 GMT -5
lol, dont worry, you'll be in the story very soon...
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Post by MightySage on Oct 27, 2008 11:53:05 GMT -5
just want it to be known I havn't forgotten about this, just impossible to upload with my current circumstances.
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Oct 27, 2008 14:20:11 GMT -5
Where do you live? I'll drive there and read it if I have to.
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Post by MightySage on Nov 1, 2008 10:47:37 GMT -5
Boca Raton.
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Nov 1, 2008 15:37:19 GMT -5
*tries to find it*
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Post by MightySage on Nov 4, 2008 17:45:44 GMT -5
Florida, you taco.
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Nov 4, 2008 20:32:24 GMT -5
*makes a map so that he can drive across the entire state in search of MS's house* I will find you...... eventually.
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Post by MightySage on Nov 8, 2008 15:01:50 GMT -5
*floating behind him*
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Post by SquirrelBoy on Nov 9, 2008 16:41:20 GMT -5
*in Mexico asking a chicken for directions*
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